As part of their Literacy work, pupils in Year 4 have been writing description settings of imaginary settings.
An Imaginary World
The room is cosy and very comfortable. It is huge and unbelievable. That's how cosy Dorothy's room is. Her bed is soft and comfortable. The floor is wooden. She has pictures on the wall, and she has a fountain to get water out of. She has lots of books.
There are lots of clothes in her wardrobe that are silky and soft. Her windows are large and round, and through them she can see lots of plants and flowers. She was dazzled by the emeralds in her room and all the beautiful things. She could hear the animals and smell delicious food.
by Chloe, Year 4
The room is very spacious, comfortable and immaculate. The bed is enormous and comfortable. The bedspread is made of fabrics. The floor is tiled, but the tiles are made of gorgeous emeralds.
There is a beautiful water fountain of apple green marble. The books are bigger than three bibles put together. There are clothes made of rare greenish silk and the curtains are made of sparkling green sequins. You can see an enormous bed surrounded with sparkling green marble walls. You can hear water rushing down the fountain and you can smell lime flavoured brownies.
You can see an unforgettable view of smooth calm water in the river. The view makes you feel calm. The windows are arched and have emerald panes. You can smell the finest perfume of the flowers and there are extraordinary things in the room.
by Sarah-Beth, Year 4
The room was spacious, light, cosy, comfortable, and unbelievable!!! The floor was brilliantly tiled and even stepping on it would bring a shiver down your spine. The pictures were of boats, badgers and birds. There were big books, small books, and gigantic books!
Out of the window you could see a lake and dazzling flowers! You could hear the church bells ringing and the black birds singing. What a dazzling place it is!!!
by Tommy, Year 4
Dorothy's room is cosy and green. The bed is comfortable. The floor is wooden, and there are shelves and a clock on the wall. She has a fountain made of marble. She has got five books. Her clothes are made of fine silk. You can smell apricots. You can hear a gentle hum in the house.
Her room has a square window with curtains that are like a dark butterfly. The view through the window is amazing. You can see the water fountain which is a light green. All the features in her bedroom are green and even her pet is a kind of greenish colour.
by Nicole, Year 4
