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What is... a Rainbow?



A rainbow is a pack of coloured pencils,
lined up on a piece of blue paper.

It is cold water,
being thrown over a painting.

It is a stripy
multicoloured jumper,
being put in a washing machine.


It is a coloured beach ball,
being kicked into the sky.


It is a sparkling diamond ring,
being polished in the jewellers.


By Ellie, Year 5


What is... a Rainbow?



A rainbow is a red pencil,
drawing a beautiful picture.
It is yellow paint,
being splashed on to blue paper.

It is an orange,
cut up into segments.
It is a palm leaf,
swaying in the gentle breeze.

It is the blue ocean,
waves crashing against the rocks.
It is an indigo diamond necklace,
glistening against soft skin.

It is a violet flower,
in a tall glass vase.

By Oliver, Year 5



Who Am I?


She is a cunning fox,
A glass of champagne
A talent show,
A marvellous musical.
She is the queen of rock,
A box of truffles,
A splash of water,
A doggy biscuit.

Who Am I?



Sharon Osbourne

By Bethany, Year 5



What is Snow?



Snow is like white paper being
ripped up and throne in the air.
It is like a bubble bath,
soft and relaxing.
It is snow drop flowers,
covering the ground.
It is glistening stars,
Falling from the night sky.

By Zack, Year 5



What is Snow?



The snow is icing sugar, being sprinkled onto a Christmas cake. It is a sheep,
being sheared in the field.

It is rice shaken and sieved,
on to a green plate.

It is a white blanket,
covering the ground.

It is coconut ice-cream,
melting in the sun.

By Group 5, Year 5

     Who am I?



She is a timid mouse,
A pumpkin,
A charming prince's ball,
A grandfather clock,
A wonderful blue dress,
A beautiful diamond necklace.

She is delicate pearl,
A feather duster,
A broom stick,

A fairy tale.

Who am I?



Cinderella


By Emma, Year 5

He is a strong lion,
An express train,
A speeding bullet,
A bright red sports car.

He is a laser beam,
A twister,
A cat ready to pounce,
A volcano ready to erupt.

He is a concord,
A sleek sky-scraper
A piece of steel.
Who am I?


Superman

By Group 2


He is a sharp blood stained blade,
A silky black cape,
An icicle on a winter's day.
A man eating shark.

He is a moonlit sky,
A poisonous plant,
A blood sucking bat,
A shiver down your spine.
He is a lonely graveyard.
Who am I?



Dracula

By Group 1


What is the moon?



The moon is a piece of goats' cheese,
on a delicious pizza.

It is a golf ball,
hit high into the sky.

It is a silver milk bottle top,
floating in a muddy puddle.

It is a clock face,
striking at midnight.

It is a sparkling marble,
rolling around the floor.

It is a bright bulb,
lighting up the street.

By Group 3


Who am I?

I am as strong as a lion and as brave as one too
I am as tanned as a tree, I run faster than a leopard.
I wear fancy suits and mostly eat fruit. I love my films.

Who am I!!!!!

by Aiden, Year 5


Who am I?

He is a fast train speeding down the track,
A knight in shining armour,
A defender of the realm,
A fierce lion fighting against the enemy.

He is a red devil,
A black escalade disappearing into the distance,
A red boot kicking a ball,
A sliding tackle.

He is new diamond ring sitting in the shop window,
A hidden gem

Who am I?

(Answer: Phil Bardsley)

by Connor, Year 5




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